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:iconthespiritcarrieson:
OH MY!! this is the first critique that I make so I hope I'll be fair and make it as good as you deserve it ;)

I think I would be more confortable doing a first critique of a draw or a painting 'cause I have more knowledge in that area but I'm going to give it a try :P

the moment I saw this amazing pic I felt in love!!!! and when I saw the critique thing in the bottom I just thought: "THAT'S IT!! have to make it" :P

so... I love the black and white that you gave to the pic! I love high contrasts! and you made them :D

the light and the shadows makes me want to stare at it like for hours! so I can see all the details! then the little 'smell' of blue/green colour that you added makes it even more interesting :P

it's really interesting the contrast between the scenery and the model! but at the same time I think it's a complementary contrast! :D
she is really well dressed and the scenery have graffitis and stuff! :P
but at the same time her shoes and dress with this scenery makes us think in something like rockabilly!!

it's an interesting thing that you just cut the model head... but I just think that it made it perfect! usually when you look to someone the first thing you notice is the others face! it's one of the things that makes us unique and it's our reference point to know each other! cutting it you just make us paying attention to the position of her body that it's some kind of shy, some kind of 'marlin monroe' style :giggle:
and this makes us know that it's not important the person who's there but what she is trying to represent... maybe somekind of style, some kind of mood :P

and then that texture that you added (I think :P) made it look rusty or something :P and gaves a great look! ;)

so I think it's a great pic!! :aww:

maybe alot of people may not agree with me... but hey! I'm just a girl who likes to take pics ;)

and this one I really like it! please keep the great work you made us used to ;)
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:iconxxkiriku:
Gosh, dear.. you made me happy with your critique!
I was on the point of crying for happiness.
Thank you for taking your time to write a critique.
I can definitely say that this is the most beautiful critique I've received until today.

So, thanks a lot. (:

:hug:

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Mario Sirica | Photographer & Dreamer
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:iconthespiritcarrieson:
:D

I'm really happy that you like it! :hug:

but I made some mistakes like, I wrote 'marlin monroe' and it is supposed to be MARILYN! sorry :blush:

english is not my main language! :P

you made me really hapy to know that you liked this critique SO much!! that gives me motivation to continue doing critiques :D

:hug:

keep the great work! ;)

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infected with the flower fever :flowerpot:
:iconxxkiriku:
Don't worry for your English, I've understood everything. ;]
I'm not English, too. So, I hope you had understood me. I'm always unsure when I write in English, though I'm good with it. d:

:hug:

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Mario Sirica | Photographer & Dreamer
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:iconthespiritcarrieson:
:giggle:

don't worry I can and did understand you really well :D

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infected with the flower fever :flowerpot:

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